Ruka ref (red)

Har har even if you had said I couldn't write a critique, I'd still write one. Ahem. So, on with the critique. Like I said on Skype, the lower legs look a smidge too long. This could be fixed by either lowering the knee or shortening the lower leg. One thing I didn't mention on Skype is the tail placement. Like the knees, you might want to move that down just a tad bit. I also didn't mention the bodied part of the jeans. I really don't know what else to call it, but the section of the jeans that covers your butt and other areas that I dare not mention. I'd move that up a little bit on the waist, more around the thinner part of his abdomen. The way it is now, it looks a little low, and he might have a hard time keeping his pants up. As I said on Skype, you might want to move his collar bones up a ways. Right about where your diagonal line shading ends would be good, actually. It would look much more natural.

You know about the saw already, but I'd just like to point out that it would probably be very uncomfortable to saw even a stick of half melted butter in half that way. I'll get my dad to give you a nice, long rant about the structure of a saw on Skype, because he's the carpenter in the family. Still, your wrist would be tilted very awkwardly, thus making it nearly impossible to use the strength required to saw through certain things (like bone and such, I'm assuming o.o).

Overall this is a beautiful piece and fairies and unicorns.